The darkened room was lit by whispering voices
"i want to kiss you"
"we can't" heaved the female voice
"No such word as can't" responded the deep male voice,briskly, as he moved a step closer.
"we shouldn't she replied with haste, as she stepped further into the darkness.
"I wish...i wish.." she muttered.
"Don't wish ...DO" intercepted Sean as he steps forward,his face is lit from the faint light into the room,through the window, from the solitary street lamp.
Sean stands there peering into the dark and beckons her forward with his eyes.
"Lola" he whispers "i want to kiss you" he utters achingly,as his heart beats like a drum roll,in anticipation.
Silence envelopes the room,and is only punctured by the constant droning noise of the fridge in the distant kitchen.What seemed like eternity and a day elapsed for Sean.Then suddenly, Lola accepted his inviting eyes,and joins him in the light.
The two faces float slowly towards each other like a fatal beautiful collision into the inevitable entangling of lips.
Sean's breath blankets Lola's face,as her harsh anticipating gulps pierce through her ears.
Just upon impact, a voice is clearly heard in the distance,stalling the two faces in the light,like two deers interrupted by another world.
"I'm home now,gotta go,don't want to wake up the missus" drifted the voice,into the bedroom,via the front door .The humming fridge was heard no more as keys rustle in the door.
Impact evaded ,as panic calm roamed the room.
thought
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Interesting........... What happens in Scene two..... what's Lola thinking?
ReplyDeletestay tuned for the next scene...thanks for the interest.This has a lot of followers hooked.
ReplyDeleteI can see why...... has that transfix about a really good novel.... love it. Waiting patiently for scene two.
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